
Right about here I start jonesing for details I may use later on. I darken certain areas and the facial features get alot of attention. I consider it a dry run for the emotional value I'm shooting for. At this stage I'm getting a sense of how I want to finish. It may sound odd, but this is when the painting TELLS ME where to go next.
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Very pretty, John.
Yo
Posted by Yocheved Menashe | December 23, 2008 5:30 PM
Posted on December 23, 2008 17:30
HEY YO
Gots a LOOOONG way to go.
Posted by john Cox | December 23, 2008 5:58 PM
Posted on December 23, 2008 17:58
I'm sure there are analogs in other arts (music, architecture, dance, etc.). In modern (computer-mediated) writing, I find it's a two-sided battle between the words and the author, with lots of give and take on both sides as the product evolves toward a finished state. I'm constantly listening, over and over, to what the present words are saying to me, and attempting to force my will on them, as we struggle toward some grounds middle.
Posted by Myno | December 23, 2008 8:46 PM
Posted on December 23, 2008 20:46
HEY MYNO
I see your point clearly. The creative process is rarely a straight line to a finished product. Invariably, there's a tipping point where the project itself makes it clear how it should be finished. It's a combination of personal aesthetic and giving yourself a chance to try some new ideas without having to plan every detail.
Knowing where you want to take your idea is important, but it's the tiny little wavers of inspiration that make it special.
Posted by john Cox | December 23, 2008 11:43 PM
Posted on December 23, 2008 23:43
If it's not too premature to suggest a title, how about "Dreamcatcher"?
On art philosophy:
I don't think the struggle is so much between the artist (or craftsman) & his medium as it is between the artist & his limited faculty (or accepted paradigm) as he pushes for something new.
Posted by Terwiliger | December 24, 2008 12:52 AM
Posted on December 24, 2008 00:52
I like it as is, only thing I think can evoke greater pleasure in the image is to insinuate a background.
something subtle.
I see room for a floral reference on the right, not defined, just a sorta shadow reference.
But I don't know how well that would work.
Though maybe a progression of vacant on the left, amorphous in the center and then defined on the right might lend something to the image.
but I wouldn't suggest any of those things. I would leave it exactly as it is. Don't expand on the central figure at all.
Posted by Wickedpinto | December 24, 2008 12:55 AM
Posted on December 24, 2008 00:55
Now there's an idea. Start with the background you laid down on the first post then take your reader's suggestions and add layers until complete.
However, would you be faced with have 9 blind people describing different parts of an elephant?
Posted by ferry360 | December 24, 2008 9:38 AM
Posted on December 24, 2008 09:38
HEY T
Like the title. Has a romantic vibe. I'm going to wait towards the end of the piece to decide on a title.
Nice point on your "artist's life" take. It's always been a complicated relationship between an artist and his medium. Sometimes its a love affair, sometimes it's a divorce court.
HEY PINTO
Appreciate your thoughts on the work. The painting is evolving, slowly pointing the way towards "a life", that is, a message that can sustain critique.
The addition of something organic (like flowers) is something I played with recently. It's in my next post.
HEY 360
A VERY interesting experiment! I'm not sure I'm the guy to do it, but the concept lends itself to some kind of socio-creative group think that sounds like a fabulous train wreck. Lots of drama, lots of bandages.
Posted by john Cox | December 24, 2008 12:46 PM
Posted on December 24, 2008 12:46
“One man alone can be pretty dumb sometimes, but for real bona fide stupidity, there ain’t nothin’ can beat teamwork.” – Edward Abbey
Posted by Terwiliger | December 24, 2008 11:44 PM
Posted on December 24, 2008 23:44
John, you are nice for tolerating a guy like me.
Thanks.
Posted by Wickedpinto | January 1, 2009 6:24 AM
Posted on January 1, 2009 06:24
Monique, a Leaf fan, set up this plumb persistent to believe. Now, let me regarding out that this was in no way an try to articulate one cooperate is advantage than the other. It was even-handed a goal to articulate two things.
Posted by picsus | January 5, 2009 10:22 PM
Posted on January 5, 2009 22:22