I've been commissioned to illustrate a wine label for a tiny private vineyard in California. I'll add an appropriate visual with it later on, but for now, I wanted to establish the look and feel for the project by nailing the Dark Horse logo first.
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I've been commissioned to illustrate a wine label for a tiny private vineyard in California. I'll add an appropriate visual with it later on, but for now, I wanted to establish the look and feel for the project by nailing the Dark Horse logo first.
John Cox is a painter, cartoonist, and illustrator for hire. For information about purchasing existing work or commissioning new work, contact him by e-mail at john555cox [at] hotmail.com.
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Comments (16)
Are you entertaining font suggestions? Try these (if you're going to use a pre-fab font):
(1) Centaur bold italic
(2) Poor Richard italic
(3) Goudy Old Style bold italic
Condense the font spacing & they won't look as generic.
Posted by Terwiliger | February 21, 2008 4:35 AM
Posted on February 21, 2008 04:35
The bottom one...it looks very Manichewitz-y, like it would be found in an old bubbe's cupboard, no?
:-)
Posted by Erica | February 21, 2008 7:25 AM
Posted on February 21, 2008 07:25
The dictionary says "a dark horse candidate is one who is nominated unexpectedly, without previously having been discussed or considered as a likely choice."
I'm trying to think of what a logo would look like that I might initially ignore, but then come back to choose...
An interesting contradiction in goals - design a logo obviously intended to be noticed but one that conveys the feel of something initially overlooked.
This is why I'm an engineer instead of an artist.
Posted by BilgeRat | February 21, 2008 8:49 AM
Posted on February 21, 2008 08:49
I like the third design best.
Posted by Jason Trommetter | February 21, 2008 9:18 AM
Posted on February 21, 2008 09:18
I'm with Jason. 3rd one begs for a horse head logo.
Posted by GarandFan | February 21, 2008 9:58 AM
Posted on February 21, 2008 09:58
I might as well go all in and make my choice known publicly. "C" it is, it grabbed me.
The name is due to the skepticism I started with, and I actually have a dark horse.
Thanks for the comments everyone.
Cheers
Posted by Allen | February 21, 2008 2:00 PM
Posted on February 21, 2008 14:00
Remove the oval from "B".
Posted by Stormwatch | February 21, 2008 6:19 PM
Posted on February 21, 2008 18:19
I would take the 3rd font and add it to the 2nd art element. If I could draw like you though, I'd probably script my own typeface.
Posted by Doug Toney | February 21, 2008 7:05 PM
Posted on February 21, 2008 19:05
I'd go with #3 as well. Add a rearing black horse and there you go.
Posted by Laura | February 21, 2008 7:19 PM
Posted on February 21, 2008 19:19
HEY EVERYONE
Thanks for the input. I'll be showing the finished piece soon. There's more to this than you know.
Posted by john Cox | February 22, 2008 3:48 AM
Posted on February 22, 2008 03:48
I feel like doing a little Don Rickles bit. No offense intended.
ERICA
It's "Dark Horse"--not "Dark Chchchorse."
BILGERAT
"Product packaging designed to be initially overlooked..."
You're an engineer. No kidding.
Posted by Rutager | February 22, 2008 5:45 AM
Posted on February 22, 2008 05:45
AND TERWILIGER
Get a life!!!
Posted by Rutager | February 22, 2008 5:46 AM
Posted on February 22, 2008 05:46
Hey John!
You getting paid 'in kind'?
:o)
Posted by GarandFan | February 22, 2008 6:09 PM
Posted on February 22, 2008 18:09
C is the way to go, imho :) The main issue I see with A and B are the font shadows - the illusion of 3D just doesn't go well with a flat bottle label. Also, the font in C helps create an atmosphere of mystery, darkness, also speed.
Posted by Kukn | February 22, 2008 6:53 PM
Posted on February 22, 2008 18:53
HEY G
As a matter of fact, I will be given a couple bottles plus the agreed fee.
Posted by john Cox | February 23, 2008 4:29 AM
Posted on February 23, 2008 04:29
Just a 'couple'? Or a couple of 'cases'? :o) Hick!
Posted by GarandFan | February 23, 2008 7:27 PM
Posted on February 23, 2008 19:27